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The Story Hatchery was founded in 2009 to give children and adults a vibrant, interactive, and nourishing space to make the impossible possible. We give permission to the bold dreamers to act, to make change, to reach far and wide, to fall, to risk...


Monday, May 16, 2011

Student Work: Story Excerpt by Leah Wilson


This is an excerpt from a group story students have been working on this year that will appear in its entirety in the upcoming Story Hatchery Anthology this summer. 

            
Story Excerpt

by

Leah Wilson, age 13

             I walked quickly up the hallway to homeroom.  My bus was always late, so I had to hurry.  Other kids laughed and shouted across the hallway.  I hated how they could never be quiet.  Quiet was much better.
            “Jeremy!” yelled a voice from behind me.  I knew who it was without seeing him.  It was my worst tormentor, a bully named Dan.  I tried to run through the crowd, but my backpack was so heavy running was impossible.
            Dan grabbed my backpack and yanked it as hard as he could.  I was pulled to the dirty tiled floor by the force, landing painfully on my lumpy backpack.  Dan and his gang snorted with laughter.
            “What you got in there, Jeremy, an elephant?” jeered Dan.  “That would be useful—you could stand on it in basketball so you could put the ball in the hoop.”  Laughing again, Dan and his gang strode off in a pack. I heard Dan say, “He’s not even worth beating up.”
            “Yeah, he’s so wimpy it would be over so fast nobody could see it,” agreed one of his friends.
            My heart pounding with anger, I stood up, trying to ignore the pain in my back, and hurried to homeroom.  I got to my seat just as the bell rang with a loud, annoying buzz.  I set my heavy backpack next to my desk.  Most kids went to their lockers before coming to homeroom, but I needed to be prepared for anything, so I crammed all my stuff in my ratty old backpack and carried it everywhere.
            After the Pledge of Allegiance and the announcements, my teacher handed out tests from last week.  My math test grade was a C-, my language arts test grade was an A-, my science test grade was a B, and my social studies quiz grade was a D.  None of this surprised me.  I didn’t have much time to study, with my job, buying food, and homework, and social studies and math were my worst subjects.  I was okay at language arts because I like poetry, which is what we’re studying now. 
            “Some of your parents will be very disappointed with your grades,” my teacher said, handing a paper to a girl who glanced at it, turned to her friend in the seat behind her, and squealed, “I got a hundred!”
            I rolled my eyes. Marta, the girl who always got A’s, and her best friend, Ella, were showoffs.  They got an A+ for popularity, and they were model students.  They and the rest of their group were the prettiest, most liked girls in eighth grade.
            My teacher, who disapproved of talking in class, didn’t notice Marta speaking to Ella.  “Some of your parents,” she continued, “will not be very happy at all with the lack of effort some of you show.”
            A stab of longing pierced my heart.  Maybe it would be nice to have parents that cared and were disappointed when you didn’t do well.  But my parents never cared.  My dad didn’t care about anything, and my stepmother was too busy in her teenager world.  I think she just never finished growing up.  And my real mother?  I didn’t even know if she was alive, and if she was, she obviously didn’t care, or else she’d be here with me.  I pushed my longing away.  Who cared about parents?
            After the teacher dismissed us, I headed down the hall to art class.  It was the one subject I really, really liked. As I trudged through the mob of noisy kids trying to shove me to the dirty walls so they could get past, I heard something clatter to the floor behind me.
            I turned around and faced Marta and Ella, both holding pink cell phones, tiny keyboards slid out, as if they had just been texting (which they probably had been, since they texted their friends all the time).  Ella was holding my iPod, which must have fallen out of the pocket in my backpack I stored it in.
            “OMG, this is, like, fifty years old,” said Ella, disgusted. I was sure she and Marta only bought the newest, coolest iPods.
            “I don’t think iPods were invented fifty years ago,” I said, holding out my hand for my iPod.
“OMG. He’s, like, so weird,” said Marta.
            “Well, duh.  He’s Jeremy,” explained Ella, flinging my name off the tip of her tongue with distaste.  Marta laughed, and Ella dropped the iPod on the ground with a crash. “Here, have your stupid iPod.  Who would want it anyway?”

Tuesday, May 10, 2011

Student Work: Story-in-Progress Excerpt by Skyler Grogan


         Excerpt from a story in progress at The Story Hatchery. This story will appear in its entirety in the 2011 anthology coming out this summer. 

Story-in-Progress Excerpt

by 

Skyler Grogan, age 13   

            The screen door creaked as Donna trudged into her rusty trailer. The sounds of crickets and frogs chirping leaked into the musky living room air, signaling the beginning of spring. Life finally blooming in the empty winter’s lungs.
            Dan, her son, sat at the TV, eating a microwave dinner. He was hunched over the lukewarm corn, shoveling it into his gaping mouth. Donna sat next to him, stirring dust from the mushy cushions.
            “Hey, sweetheart. Sorry I couldn’t be here earlier. I was working overtime for Matilda,” she said, taking off her shoes and massaging her calloused feet. Her cheekbones sharply jutted from her narrow face, supporting fat bags under her eyes. Once she had been a beautiful girl, but hours of slaving at restaurants had sucked most of the beauty from her like a ravenous leech.
            “That’s what you always say,” mumbled Dan through a mouthful of watery corn. Donna guiltily looked at the dingy carpet.
            “At least you don’t have to work,” she said. “There’s a poor boy at the bakery who’s so skinny, if he stood sideways he’d disappear.”
            “At least he has a mom.” Dan kept staring at the TV, but what he said was sincere.
            “I don’t believe he does. He’s a nice boy, doesn’t talk much. I’m not even sure he has a home. His name’s Jeremy.” Donna continued up her leg, soothing the raw muscles in her calves. Dan looked at Donna, furrowing his brow.
            “Jeremy? Jeremy what?” He dropped his spoon.
            “I think it was Mabe, or May, or something. Why?”
            “No reason.” Dan leaned and dropped his empty tray into the wastebasket. “I’m going outside for a little.”
            Donna didn’t look up from her leg. “Be back by 1.”
            Stepping into the crisp air, Dan gulped in breaths. He dragged a hammer off the porch and smashed it into a rock. It chipped and showed white specks. He smashed and smashed, sending sparks everywhere. The rock turned to minute pebbles, and Dan began striking bare ground. He threw the hammer across his yard and dropped. He was silent.
            Jeremy knew his pain. And it made him sick. 

Wednesday, May 4, 2011

Feature in the Winston Salem Monthly

The Story Hatchery Contest Winners are published in this month's Winston Salem Monthly! Check out the online version at the link below, or better yet, pick up a print version for the full experience. Each winning story has an illustration and the article has some wonderful photographs of our students at work in The Story Hatchery. Look at the wonderful cover art of the magazine! It's all for you, wonderful students, who are so dedicated to expressing yourselves through crafted language and art! Congratulations to all our winners, finalists, and participants!



http://www.winstonsalemmonthly.com/index.php/site/features/hatching-stories/

Monday, May 2, 2011

Personification--or giving weird objects eyes and a mouth!

Personification is giving human traits (qualities, feelings, action, or characteristics) to non-living objects (things, colors, qualities, or ideas).


To have the most fun with this, turn to the many objects sitting around you right now and imagine giving one of the objects a pair of eyes (or one eye) and a mouth.


...are you laughing yet? 


I just imagined a vase on my mantel with eyes and a mouth. It is a vase I have filled with sand and sticks--a minimalist arrangement I swear looks good! And now the vase is telling me in a British accent that I have no taste and the sticks are crude and he will not stand for one more scratch. "I am made for fresh flowers and the dishonor you have visited upon me...oh, I can't bear to think of how many years I am imprisoned to stand here like a yard waste bin full of the dead and discarded. Miss, how do you sleep at night?" 


Oh, the poor vase. I must get some fresh flowers! 


Check out this video of a wonderful character created from an object named Marcel. Try making your own short video personifying an object.